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chapter two-The Visit by krishnan iyer, 2005
Published 3 October 2005 :: Fan Fiction
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chapter two-The Visit


Antionette street was a small street situated in the
suburbs of london.Its occupants were all loving and
sharing .A sense of warmth and happiness usually spread over all that stepped on the street. One house was overjoyous that day ,they had a new addition to their family and were organizing a party to celebrate the occassion.
The Swatches were a pretty couple and were the envy of many that resided on the street.Mr Swatch earned a
decent salary and Mrs Swatch was a housewife.They were a well off family but only one sadness had tormented there entire life.They didnot have children.After months of negotiation with the orphanages they finally had got a letter.This letter

From
Mr Schotten
Manager,
St. Marys Orphange
London


To
MR John Swatch
no 9,Antoniette street
West london

Sir,
Subject:Location of a suitable child

This letter is in reference to your application of to
the orphange regarding adoption of a child.We are happy to inform you that we have a child fitting your
descriptions.If you will come by to my office at 1:00
pm on monday we can sort the legal matters.

Thanking you,

Yours sincerely
Mr Mark Schotten

(P.S:Please give me a confirmatory call so i can mark
it down.)



This letter had changed their lives them beyond their
wildest imagination.They were finally going to have a
kid.
Mr John had already gone to the office on monday and
Signed a few legal documents while Helen was talking
to the cheif matron about the child’s daily routine and
the care to be taken while handling the child.When they
saw the child they were enthralled by the cute face of
the baby.The skin was pink and the the hands were so
tiny .The eyes were also small but the baby had blue
eyes .
The baby boy laughed and pushed its hands up at the
Young to be mother.She had tears in her eyes when the
baby touched her.They were to take the baby home the
next day but helen would have wanted to grip the baby
and run away with him.
She wondered how the natural mother had abandoned such a cute baby.But when she enquired the babies parents had died in car crash a week earlier.
The next day all the family members had gathered near
the gate to welcome the little boy.Everyone simply loved the boy .The couples parents were delighted to have a grandchild.Moreover they were delighted to have a cute little boy grandson.
The Party went on all evening.At midnight the Swatches
bid goodbye to last of their guests and closed the
gate.They went back to look at their baby boy sleeping.
The were laughing about some lighter moments in the
evening when Helen froze.A lady was sitting on the
couch.She was young,having a thin frame and red hair.But the thing that was most striking about the lady was her eyes ,they were blue.
"I’m sorry to shock you like this."She began in a tender
voice."I know i must have frightened the heavens out of
you.But the matter I have come here for is
important...".John cut the rest of her sentence.
"Can’t it wait for the Morning miss.."John stopped
"Miss Lisa ,Lisa forthrift."
"Well Miss Lisa its quite late you see."
"No,I’m sorry to say but it is very important that you
know.Its about the boy ."As she continued she could feel
three pairs of eyes bore into her.For the next Hour she
talked and when she left there was a eery silence for
sometime.





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The continuation of my first chapter.PLs comment any mistake i might have made

Comments
krishnan iyer, 3 October 2005:
THANKS SCOTT YOU SEEM TO BE THE ONLY ONE READIN IT.I"LL IMPROVE ON THE GRAMMAR THOUGH

Scot Savage, 3 October 2005:
Story is getting interesting but the grammar errors are killing you.

        




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