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She came from heaven Among us, apart The time stood still And she stole my heart Her sheer presence Does make me numb To others I’m deaf And stupid and dumb She’s full of mystery She’s conquered my mind My days turn nights It’s one of a kind Those eyes, eluding Killed me her smile Her past and present Is a questioned profile Between us, grows A thick black mist To her, I’m nothing I don’t exist This feeling is natural Insane but human I’m just a boy And she’s all woman I’ll leave it at that She’d never know me My heart skips a beat But she’ll never see She’s from the elite She’s obviously higher But I’ll stay at my feet To be, her secret admirer How did you like this text? You have to be logged on to be able to rate and comment. Logon or Register , it won't take up more than 10 seconds of your time. Rating   Current rating is: 4,2 30 readers have rated this text Author's description Ever fallen in love without reason with someone you saw everyday, but never knew who that someone was? This is for someone who I admire, but unfortunately she’s not single and is definitely older. Nevertheless, inspiration was what she was, and this is dedicated to her, but she’ll never know :) Comments Agnes Mirra, 22 August 2010: very nice...Full feelings! Lovely poetry! Fatima Khan, 6 August 2010: Simple, effective & impressive. Well-written. Tomás Ó Cárthaigh, 18 March 2010: I like reading this poem once again... Mansi Rampuria, 27 June 2009: Hi Suheil! I really enjoyed reading it. Simple yet effective, very very impressive! ... :) Robert Lindberg, 22 January 2009: I like the rhyme that pulls the poem along! Honest comments that you write about here is always appreciated. good work. Vaishali Patgaonkar, 28 October 2008: Oh, I wish, she`d known about these beautiful words written for her. Shreyash Pai, 5 July 2008: Secret Admirer... sigh!! u bring back memories mate :D:D Josh LaBrake, 4 July 2008: Wow. Excellent. Inspiration can be amazing when it hits, can’t it? I’ve been looking for a little myself lol... Very good job. Gaurav Keskar, 4 June 2008: Really enjoyed this poem. Loved your simple, yet effective style. Deboshree Patra, 2 June 2008: the feelings hav been given geniune soulful words... good work jus tc Acquira T, 1 June 2008: Very lyrical and sweet. Ranjith Boyanapalli, 5 March 2008: really heart touching ! Anonymous, 27 February 2008: Wow, that’s really good! Sajo John, 23 January 2008: hey buddy...loooong time... nice poem...glad to c ur still writin n stuff... gr8 flow...deserves to b in the top list... gr8 stuff buddy :) suhas P S, 13 January 2008: Nothin less than perfect da....exactly how i felt when i had a crush on a fairy, in tenth standard... Manosij Majumdar, 1 January 2008: Wow! Most read thing on WTY. =) Congrats! nicky k, 24 August 2007: SEXC work ! Rahul Bose, 29 March 2007: I love the lines.. so much depth. "She’s from the elite She’s obviously higher But I’ll stay at my feet To be, her secret admirer" I am a fan of yours. Rahul Bose, 29 March 2007: ’Nishabd’ inverted I guess. I can understand your feeling. Perfect. As your friend I would have tried to forward this to her. But I don’t know her and this way it’ll have to stay. Meenaa Iyer, 28 March 2007: Superb stuff....all the best :-) Dani Scham, 1 March 2007: awesome!! good rhyming, it flows well. I was really intrigued by the poem, and normally i get bored fast. GREAT Nithu Joseph, 2 August 2006: ahh wt do i say!its perfect! the feeling whn in "love" etc...brilliant! u hav captured the emotions really well! 5 stars neday!:) Anonymous, 13 June 2006: Better luck next time......... sara khan, 1 June 2006: No, I haven’t..good luck with this love problem... Manosij Majumdar, 1 June 2006: Nice to see you here again! Keep trying, pal. She might be writing a poem about you somewhere :) Say, she’s not your boss’s wife, is she? Ghost Writer, 1 June 2006: Well said. Did she read this? Stephen Shearer, 31 May 2006: There is always at least one in our life that will forever be unobtainable. Scot Savage, 31 May 2006: Such things as these inspire many things. L. Alan Meyer, 31 May 2006: Infatuation................. it’s somethin’ special, aint it? It’ll make your heart skip a beat now and then. |
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